It's all a bribe
Concluding in a lie
No "good" comes from it
Yet, it's very looked up to
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Sadly said, but many are victims
Sucked into it, and rarely spat out
It's never recognized to them what they're doing
Buying this, giving into that....
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It's all part of the game
1 rule though, you got to be gullible
Because with out it....
YOU LOSE!
9 comments:
The end of the poem says it all... Goes gret with your topic..Great job...
Its nice peom i liked it nice
i agree with daisy the ending is the best part :)
i like the end :] poems are hard! grr nice job
Is being gullible really a winning trait? Being gullible means that you do not necessarily think for your self. You follow what other people say, even if it is wrong.
But sadly in today society, not following what ever is Mainstream, sort of does make you a "loser." It is a sad day when people are no longer scolded for being one of the crowd, and put down when they try to be them selves. This in a way has created a society that is like eating the same thing everyday. Bland, old, unexciting and lacking any true zest.
I really liked your poem . I hope you don't mind but I put your poem in a project I'm doing . I made sure to tell where & whom I got it from . Don't like taking credit for what's not mine .
liked it too. even from here in Uganda
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